Hayward's Primary School

The giant in the city by Charlie Hu

Feb
9
2012

 

The giant in the city


 

 

On the edge of the city something huge is moving something colossal is moving.Something huge and towering and magical.Something bushy and green.From the opposite direction comes a nine year old sporty girl called Charlie.All of a sudden she dropped all here of stuff and stared at this green giant.She wanted to know what he wanted what he was here for.She said “let me show you around”.First she showed him the town then she showed him the high street the green giant saw a speed camera but the giant did not know it was though.So he put his giant eye up to it the police saw the massive eye.They jumped out of there seats and spilt there coffee.They ran to the high street and they stopped and stared at this huge thing.The giant and Charlie ran as fast as they could and the police started chasing them but some of the police stayed and rang the air forces to come to the high street but they had to bring a net to try and catch the giant.So all of the air forces came with a net and started searching for the giant.They looked every were for the giant except at the park.They got to the park but they could not find him after hours of looking they saw something moving near the trees.So they searched over there.Then they realised that the giant was camouflaged in the trees all along.They should of known that he was camouflaging in the trees the whole time because he looked like a tree.A few minutes after they found him the giant realised they found him.So the giant and Charlie started running again.They stopped running to catch their breath.But before he new it he was court.They took him to the police station.They put him in front of the police station for tourist attraction.The girl did not know what to do.After about an hour of thinking she finally had a plane.Her plan was to go to the King and Queen and tell them how bad the deforestation is and how she needed to get him out of prison to get him on television to explain why he was here and that was what shedid.On the way she was thinking what kind of thing they were doing to the poor giant.All of a sudden she stopped and thought that why would the grade let her in.But she had a plane.So she got to the castle but she forgot her plan.But then she realised there was no guards.She thought she was bonkers! So she walked in
and she thought that this might be a trap.But she kept on waking but every step she took she got more and more worried about the giant.She walked in to the castle very quitely.But there was loads of doors so Charlie did not know what door to go through.So she started opening doors.In one room there was a library she went in and i looked throw a book and she was amazed all the pages
were made out of gold.Charlie went around the next book shelf and there were the guards all siting around a small table looking at a big book.Then one guard saw here and told all the others that she was here and they all started chasing here. After an hour or two she lost them.So she got out of that room as soon as possible.After ages of running and opening doors she came to the last door she saw some guards so she quickly went into the room and there right in front of her was the King and Queen eating their tea and drinking water they looked at here and said”What are you doing here?”She said “well……….um i’m here because i wanted to tell you that my ,well, my friend has been captured by the Air Forces”"oh so who is this friend of yours?”said the Queen “ho didn’t i tell you my friend is a well a giant”said Charlie.”Ok lets go save this giant”said the king.”But before we go is this giant friendly? “said the Queen .”Yes”said Charlie.So off they went.But before they went the King and Queen had to get changed.It was a long journey but finally they got there.The king walked in to the police station and said “can you let the giant go please because i know why he is here .” “Ok i will let it go but what will you give me in return” said the police man.”I.i.i will give you some money” “ok i will release the giant”.So the giant got released and he went on T.v and Charlie and her best friend Grace even made badges to save the rainforest.After the giant went on T.v everything got a lot better in the rainforest.The giant went back to the forest and it was all back to normal.

The end

 

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Comments

  1. Verry good Charlie well done!

    :)

  2. Well done Charlie great literacy I am looking forward for all of brillant storys !

  3. A lovely story Charlie, very well done.

  4. Awesome story Charlie.

  5. Well done Charlie we are very proud of you you worked so hard :)

    Mandy and Doris (Mum and Nan)

  6. Brilliant Charlie

  7. Wow! Well done Charlie. :)

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