Hayward's Primary School

WOW The secret cave By Ethan

Jul
1
2012

The secret cave

Zoe peeped her head through the wooden door. She could not believe her eyes. In front of her was a green and yellow valley with red and multicoloured flowers. Also red berry trees. She heard footsteps and bushes rustling and long grass swaying everywhere. She heard footsteps coming closer and closer and she saw a spec of light near a cave. But she definitely knew someone was watching her so she ducked down behind a big boulder.

The unicorns summons the king of the unicorns. Luckily the king of the unicorns sprung out of the magic water he lives in. His mane flowing like a waterfall, his hooves scratching the earth beneath him. Dr Slythe and the king were peeping menacingly over a muddy bank. The king of the unicorns and all the others stamped their hooves and charged loudly away.

In the night Dr Slythe and the king came to the valley. They were scared out of their skulls, but they were brave. The unicorns were sleeping gracefully next to each other. The villains could see the king of the unicorn. The unicorn made a bang! Suddenly the king fell over and the unicorns woke up. The king said ”please we only wont some magic water”. The unicorns said “ok but you have to promise to be good”.

The king shouted “NO!”and he died.

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Comments

  1. That’s great Ethan, keep up the good work

  2. Wow!

  3. WOW!!!!!!!!

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