WOW! The secret valley by Patrick

                                                                                          The secret valley

Zoe ran quickly into the gloomy valley and sat down on a log to watch the unicorns quietly dancing. Suddenly she realised that Dr Slythe was spying all that time and appeared, disturbing the beasts dancing. Zoe was furious that Dr Slythe had followed and spied on her. She knew that Dr Slythe was going to kill all of the unicorns.

Dr Slythe was silently creeping to hurt the graceful unicorns. The beasts were stamping their hooves angrily. Zoe, who was mad, threatened to scare the cunning man away by calling the unicorns and ordering them to attack.

Later that evening King andDr Slythe ran back to the village in fear. They promised they would be happy, kind and nice. The villains accepted the deal and they all cheered happily in the sunset. Dr Slythe and the king stared in embarrassment. Zoe lived with the unicorns and her life had changed.

By Patrick Kemble