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WOW The tin forest by Libertie
Oct
2
2012

WOW The tin forest by Libertie

The old man grinned in a sad way  because  everyone was  throwing  their rubbish in  his garden. He was a sad old man living in rubbish and down in the dumps. After a while the old man cried sadly for a while and then he looked out of the window and he still saw bad weather. And then he moaned because the rubbish filled up his space.

WOW My family and me by Melissa Gould
Sep
24
2012

WOW My family and me by Melissa Gould

I am 7 years old. I like painting, cooking and playing. My name is Melissa. I have best friends who are Abi, Liberty Charlotte Ellie -may and Rhiannon. I love reading and drawing  and colouring. I wished for a pony I love pony’s. I like my brother because he can get very very strict, angry and cross he mumbles all the time. Daniel is my brother and his favourite colour is blue and pink,mine is pink ,purple black and red. My favourite food is spaghetti and pasta with butter  and  cheese on top , it is delicious.  I am very kind ,helpful ,thoughtful generous and considerate. I wish I was a pretty princes .

WOW! The secret valley by Patrick
Jul
3
2012

WOW! The secret valley by Patrick

                                                                                          The secret valley

Zoe ran quickly into the gloomy valley and sat down on a log to watch the unicorns quietly dancing. Suddenly she realised that Dr Slythe was spying all that time and appeared, disturbing the beasts dancing. Zoe was furious that Dr Slythe had followed and spied on her. She knew that Dr Slythe was going to kill all of the unicorns.

Dr Slythe was silently creeping to hurt the graceful unicorns. The beasts were stamping their hooves angrily. Zoe, who was mad, threatened to scare the cunning man away by calling the unicorns and ordering them to attack.

Later that evening King andDr Slythe ran back to the village in fear. They promised they would be happy, kind and nice. The villains accepted the deal and they all cheered happily in the sunset. Dr Slythe and the king stared in embarrassment. Zoe lived with the unicorns and her life had changed.

By Patrick Kemble

 

WOW The secret cave By Ethan
Jul
1
2012

WOW The secret cave By Ethan

The secret cave

Zoe peeped her head through the wooden door. She could not believe her eyes. In front of her was a green and yellow valley with red and multicoloured flowers. Also red berry trees. She heard footsteps and bushes rustling and long grass swaying everywhere. She heard footsteps coming closer and closer and she saw a spec of light near a cave. But she definitely knew someone was watching her so she ducked down behind a big boulder.

The unicorns summons the king of the unicorns. Luckily the king of the unicorns sprung out of the magic water he lives in. His mane flowing like a waterfall, his hooves scratching the earth beneath him. Dr Slythe and the king were peeping menacingly over a muddy bank. The king of the unicorns and all the others stamped their hooves and charged loudly away.

In the night Dr Slythe and the king came to the valley. They were scared out of their skulls, but they were brave. The unicorns were sleeping gracefully next to each other. The villains could see the king of the unicorn. The unicorn made a bang! Suddenly the king fell over and the unicorns woke up. The king said ”please we only wont some magic water”. The unicorns said “ok but you have to promise to be good”.

The king shouted “NO!”and he died.

WOW The secret valley of the unicorns By Emily W
Jul
1
2012

WOW The secret valley of the unicorns By Emily W

The secret valley of the unicorns

Zoe found herself in a powerful secret valley where there were snow white unicorns dancing in the cave of wonder. A unicorn came trotting over to her. He had a sparkly crown like a drop of heaven. He told her to keep the secret valley and them a secret.

Suddenly Dr Slythe crashed through the door. Zoe was petrified about what he would do to them. Then all the huntsmen came bundling through and Dr Slythe said, “You must lock the nobody up!” Suddenly all the unicorns started charging at all the huntsman. The king of the unicorns started charging at Dr Slythe. Zoe’s unicorn took her to another secret powerful valley where nobody knew where they were, only Zoe and her unicorn.

Late that night Zoe and her unicorn were at the other valley. Zoe asked her unicorn if it had magical powers. It looked as if he was saying yes. Zoe asked if he could turn her into a unicorn. Her said yes and in two seconds she was a unicorn. At that moment Zoe thought she could give her horn to the fierce king. So she decided to give her horn to the king and then everyone had a smile on there face, especially Zoe. She had a family at last.

WOW Marshall
Jun
28
2012

WOW Marshall

WOW Joseph
Jun
28
2012

WOW Joseph

WOW Elliot H
Jun
28
2012

WOW Elliot H

WOW Kaden and Evan
Jun
28
2012

WOW Kaden and Evan

WOW John
Jun
28
2012

WOW John